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Sev - Edgy Practise Drawing :icondancingsoldier:DancingSoldier 4 0 Synneris Fal'felo - Commission :icondancingsoldier:DancingSoldier 3 0 Mirchell Albaque - Commission :icondancingsoldier:DancingSoldier 3 0 Dee Dunpeel- Vampire The Masquerade character edit :icondancingsoldier:DancingSoldier 5 0 Dee Dunpeel - Vampire The Masquerade character :icondancingsoldier:DancingSoldier 3 0 A portrait of a wonderful woman :icondancingsoldier:DancingSoldier 2 0 Mircella Fal'nar - Commission :icondancingsoldier:DancingSoldier 3 0 Aragon and D. - OC Commission :icondancingsoldier:DancingSoldier 3 1 Jainlotte Merrygale - DS2 OC :icondancingsoldier:DancingSoldier 2 3 Cyna Merrygale, the Rimefinger - DS3 OC :icondancingsoldier:DancingSoldier 2 8 Chell Bunny Lucy Loud - Ink Painting :icondancingsoldier:DancingSoldier 10 3 Siobhan - Dark Souls 3 build :icondancingsoldier:DancingSoldier 5 1 Blades of Mercy alt - Bloodborne :icondancingsoldier:DancingSoldier 2 0 Blades of Mercy - Bloodborne :icondancingsoldier:DancingSoldier 1 0 Tasha Leigh- DancingSoldier :icondancingsoldier:DancingSoldier 3 0 Sombra - Overwatch :icondancingsoldier:DancingSoldier 3 1


Soda Pop Jinx :iconayyasap:AyyaSAP 1,721 35 Overwatch Gowns :iconeinlee:einlee 12,389 393 boop :iconsakimichan:sakimichan 18,425 298
5 Things Every Writer Should Know About Pacing
1. What is pacing? For the overall story, it's the rate at which things move along, and how much time it takes to get from A to B - where A and B are anything under the purview of narrative focus, including scenes, beliefs, ideas, and characters.
Within a small block of text, it's the information density. A paragraph that takes 50 words to tell you that we're in New York* is much more slowly paced than one which takes five.
*I'm aware New York is a state and New York City is the city, but since I don't live there I'm going to wallow in this obfuscation. PS. Fuck you all, signed Chicago.
2. Okay, what is good pacing? (Small block of text edition) I'm sure you saw this coming, but it varies. Let's consider a 50-word paragraph establishing that we're in New York:
The man behind the counter shouted for people’s orders with full expectation that they knew which bagel they wanted. Given the crowd, it was probably dangerous not to know—although outside was lit
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Barbara :icondandonfuga:dandonfuga 5,065 145
Tonight, Gehrman joins the hunt :iconanzhyra:Anzhyra 209 3 Eileen The Crow :iconbonesaw999:Bonesaw999 93 1 Annalise, Queen of the Vilebloods :iconhiems214:Hiems214 12 2 Batman - Bruce Wayne :iconkiborgalexic:kiborgalexic 224 61 Harley Quinn :iconkiborgalexic:kiborgalexic 173 52
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3000 Views Mf :iconheretic-omega:Heretic-Omega 1 2
Morrigan :iconkiborgalexic:kiborgalexic 126 41 Time's Up :iconsilvermonki:SilverMonki 33 22 Blood Magic :iconttluciferal:TTLuciferal 24 2 Mizane the Librarian :iconttluciferal:TTLuciferal 38 9 Guts :iconartistocrart:ArtistocrArt 20 2



Dee Dunpeel - Vampire The Masquerade character
My Gangrel Brute. Mostly drawn while drunk and tired. He had to fight a ninja cop in his first session and that's why he's so bruised. The fucker just didn't die. >.< I also made a psychedelic edit of it  I DO COMMISSIONS >…


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Artist | Student | Traditional Art
I'm obsessed with Berserk. Feel free to give me constructive criticism, as I am far from a professional artist. I draw every day, and try to update this page frequently.


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BoneMarrowBrother Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
I like your works, it's all about refining your technique at this point. I think we might learn some stuff from eachother because it's clear that our interests intermingle. Let's engage in jolly co-operation and follow each other.
DancingSoldier Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Cartoon-Knight Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for the watch! Praise the :sun: !
DancingSoldier Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Praise the Sun! :D
Axol-The-Axolotl Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
So what ya think of the new Berserk anime?
DancingSoldier Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Every new episode has been better than the one before it. It's entertaining, but I still love the original adaption more.
SilverMonki Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What a fantastic style you have. :nod:
Keep up the great work. :)
DancingSoldier Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks! :D
SilverMonki Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome. ^^
LalyKiasca Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015  Student General Artist
Thanks for join to #BerserkManga group!!
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